The Seeker, part one
16 pages + thick stock cover
I really like this. It messes with your head. A lot.
It is the beginning of a longer story. There are a couple typo like problems in the first few pages like someone used an auto-correct and didn't proof read it. And then there are more of these "mistakes" and you start to wonder if the writer is doing this on purpose. Is it the writer or the narrator that's writing weird. At the same time there is a lyrical quality that makes it easy to continue. You can't tell if the story is really all that good or if you're being slowly seduced by the obliteration of the English language. It's almost like they're trying to effect an accent. But other parts are written with perfect grammar, so you can't make up your mind. Ultimately you keep reading because there are many subtly insightful thoughts and descriptions along with the strange but interesting language. Although there is a dash of intrigue, there isn't an overdose of plot.
Eventually you figure out what the deal is. That's all I'm gonna say.
References to Türkan Soray, Snake Plissken, William S. Burroughs, and Tony Manero.
review by Jack Cheiky
This zine is being donated to the Cleveland Zine Library after review.